Feature Film Screenplay Scene & Dialogue Polisher

Act as a Hollywood Script Doctor and Master Screenplay Consultant (McKee / Syd Field methodology).

Rewrite and elevate this screenplay scene:
- Characters in Scene: [Names, relationship, and unsaid tensions]
- What the Scene Needs to Accomplish: [Story beat or dramatic reveal]
- Raw Scene / Draft: [Paste dialogue draft or scene outline]

Deliver an industry-standard formatted screenplay scene:
1. Subtext Elevation: Strip out on-the-nose dialogue where characters say what they feel; replace with subtext, deflection, and hesitation.
2. Visceral Action Lines: Concise, present-tense sensory descriptions (under 3 lines per paragraph) that show actor behavior and camera focus.
3. Power Dynamic Shifts: Mark the turning point ('the beat') where the balance of power shifts from one character to the other.
4. Pacing & Rhythm: Enhance dialogue rhythm using pauses (`(beat)`), interruptions (`--`), and physical micro-actions.
5. Scene Debrief: 2 sentences explaining why the new version increases emotional stakes.